Rate the rhymes and make sure you keep comments inside the walls of nice like paint lines.....?

Punchlines I tell are verbal assault, words swing in blows


Next thing a ***** knows he's inhaling smelling salt


Pack KO's within' flows, hoods and jabs that catch ya nose


Dogged raps that attacks so cold, it doesn't rain cats it snows


With raps that鈥檚 chose to provided thrills with ill facts


Stay on point like cedar gliding with chills and steel tracks


I'm off the wall like mike and dice, a ***** dies with snake eyes


Fake and lies only end up in blood and shot like pink eyes


Think guys and don't get mad because I'm bad boast brag'n rattle you


And tend to tower over those opposite power like a radical


Plus I must say I'm having you lost like a million obstacles


Concentration got you thinking like my rhymes are philosophical


Your minds spinning like a top and that's drowsy in medication


Can't handle rhymes that is witty and smart like Descartes in meditations


In the end just remember friend I win, I deface pros


Embrace flows of sorts that slam the courts shut like case closed








http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FBZ5gFncT鈥?/a>Rate the rhymes and make sure you keep comments inside the walls of nice like paint lines.....?
And tend to tower over those opposite power like a radical


Plus I must say I'm having you lost like a million obstacles


Concentration got you thinking like my rhymes are philosophical


Your minds spinning like a top and that's drowsy in medication


Can't handle rhymes that is witty and smart like Descartes in meditations


In the end just remember friend I win, I deface pros


Embrace flows of sorts that slam the courts shut like case closed





dog that part is nice just try and clean up some of the ryhmes and you can be set





';Dogged raps that attacks so cold, it doesn't rain cats it snows';





that one is nice tooRate the rhymes and make sure you keep comments inside the walls of nice like paint lines.....?
Def best i've seen on this website so far.
Very nice I'd give it a 9.5/10. Their so descriptive yet flow well, just wondering how long did this take you?


@Truly, nice I sometimes do same thing I come up with a line like a school then once I get enough of them I put them all together, but mostly I just write from like a stream of consciousness it takes like 5 minutes then I clean it up but it never comes out anywhere near as good as yours.